Monday, 23 September 2013

Into the garden

Wednesday 18th September

Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.
WALT: describe
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture

The lights shined on my window every one was coming dad was giving out the presents. I got a lego set that I relay wanted.

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