Tuesday, 17 September 2013

In to the garden

Wednesday 18th September

Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.
WALT: describe
SC:
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture


The dark hatch on the side of the school was pitch black I could not beleav my eyes it was like misteris madgec. It was beside a tree that looked like a umbrella, there olso was a secret entries.

2 comments:

  1. Sam, you are getting so clever with your writing! I love these descriptive sentences! They look like sentences you would read in a book. Super work!

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  2. Sam, its Dad here on Mums laptop. Your writing is amazing, I cannot believe a seven year old can write like that! You make Mum and I so proud. Your background is very cool too- there's even the same blue as your new lamp- do you like your new lamp? Now you can lie in bed in the morning and think of more great stories to write! Love you to the moon and back x

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